THEY SAID:

HE SAID:

“HEY GIRL,

I SEE THAT TWINKLE IN YOU EYE,

THE TEAR DROP ON YOUR THIGH.

I SEE YOU-

RUNNING BAREFOOT IN THE PARK

WHITE PANTIES IN THE DARK.

I HEAR YOU-

SCREAMING WITH YOUR EYES

AS THE CLOUDS FALL FROM THE SKY.

I FEEL YOU-

TREMBLE TO MY TOUCH,

FULFILLED BUT NOT TOO MUCH.

CLOSE BUT LIKE FOREVER,

TOO FAR, FOR ME TO SAVOR…”.

SHE SAID:

“HEY BOY,

I SAW YOU TINKLE ON THAT TREE-

LIKE THE MARK YOU’LL LEAVE ON ME!

I HEAR YOU

CRYING IN THE DARK,

AS YOU ARGUE WITH YOUR HEART.

I FEEL YOU;

SQUEEZING MY LOVE STARVED HEART.

I DON’T WANT YOU TO LEAVE YOUR MARK.

I’LL RUN FROM YOU IN THE PARK,

WITH WHITE PANTIES ON THE MARK;

YOU’LL LOSE ME IN THE DARK.

YOU SEE…

I KNOW YOU, BOY!”

By Sammie L. Carter

~ by Sam373's Blog on August 24, 2009.

love the two way thought- nice one sam.. my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/04/metamorphosis/

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fiveloaf said this on February 21, 2011 at 8:17 am | Reply
I really enjoyed that, and the layout worked so well for your little story!

Here from Poetry Potluck.

http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/02/21/home/

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Jessica said this on February 21, 2011 at 11:40 am | Reply
Expressive rhymes. I enjoyed it!

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Kodjo Deynoo said this on February 21, 2011 at 12:41 pm | Reply
playful and beautiful…
there are wisdom in your words.
Cheers,
Thanks for sharing.

A++

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Jingle said this on February 21, 2011 at 7:47 pm | Reply
yes, really like the two perspectives and what unique perspectives they are!

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Wordywoman said this on February 22, 2011 at 4:38 am | Reply
good one sam. very well crafted poem.

trisha

Free Soul 20th Feb 2011

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trisha said this on February 22, 2011 at 11:40 am | Reply
- I miss you. Why have you not been communicating? I thought I had correctly subscribed to your blog (s). I will do so again.
  
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  Sam373 said this on February 22, 2011 at 11:16 pm | Reply
I dig this, the rhymes, the thoughts cool! 🙂

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Life: Between the lines said this on March 20, 2011 at 1:52 pm | Reply