THEY SAID:
HE SAID:
“HEY GIRL,
I SEE THAT TWINKLE IN YOU EYE,
THE TEAR DROP ON YOUR THIGH.
I SEE YOU-
RUNNING BAREFOOT IN THE PARK
WHITE PANTIES IN THE DARK.
I HEAR YOU-
SCREAMING WITH YOUR EYES
AS THE CLOUDS FALL FROM THE SKY.
I FEEL YOU-
TREMBLE TO MY TOUCH,
FULFILLED BUT NOT TOO MUCH.
CLOSE BUT LIKE FOREVER,
TOO FAR, FOR ME TO SAVOR…”.
SHE SAID:
“HEY BOY,
I SAW YOU TINKLE ON THAT TREE-
LIKE THE MARK YOU’LL LEAVE ON ME!
I HEAR YOU
CRYING IN THE DARK,
AS YOU ARGUE WITH YOUR HEART.
I FEEL YOU;
SQUEEZING MY LOVE STARVED HEART.
I DON’T WANT YOU TO LEAVE YOUR MARK.
I’LL RUN FROM YOU IN THE PARK,
WITH WHITE PANTIES ON THE MARK;
YOU’LL LOSE ME IN THE DARK.
YOU SEE…
I KNOW YOU, BOY!”
By Sammie L. Carter
Copyright@10/04/2008, 3:48 am
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Posted in Poetry, Relationship, Socialization
Tags: Feelings, Love, Respect, Tears
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love the two way thought- nice one sam.. my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/04/metamorphosis/
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I really enjoyed that, and the layout worked so well for your little story!
Here from Poetry Potluck.
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/02/21/home/
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Expressive rhymes. I enjoyed it!
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playful and beautiful…
there are wisdom in your words.
Cheers,
Thanks for sharing.
A++
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yes, really like the two perspectives and what unique perspectives they are!
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good one sam. very well crafted poem.
trisha
http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/02/20/free-soul-20th-feb-2011/
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I miss you. Why have you not been communicating? I thought I had correctly subscribed to your blog (s). I will do so again.
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I dig this, the rhymes, the thoughts cool! 🙂
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