Prelude

Rim Sleep

Silence

Faint vision

Rumble in my soul

Desert snow

Mountain top oasis

Hope

Semi erection

Unspoken conversation

Loud but unspoken rejection

Compromised expectation

Inward conversation

Avalanche  of expectations

Realization

Things to do

No time to waste

One and one is one

The sun had gone down

Hadn’t realized

A new day dawns

Semi-Erection

Unspoken conversation

More than a notion

FRUSTRATION

By

Sammie L. Carter

Copyright Tue 2/21/11 4:24 am

~ by Sam373's Blog on February 22, 2011.

Posted in Poetry, Relationship
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4 Responses to “Prelude”

  1. Love it! It’s so dramatic and depicts the feelings of stress and frustration very accurately. A kind of inner struggle… Awesome work 🙂

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    magher1 said this on February 24, 2011 at 2:00 pm | Reply

    • I have concluded that the unconscious is the most conscious, proving most oft that we don’t understand and if we do, we don’t comprehend.

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      Sam373 said this on February 27, 2011 at 2:07 pm | Reply

  2. wisely done…

    Thanks for the lasting support.
    you rock.

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    Jingle said this on March 1, 2011 at 7:25 pm | Reply

  3. keep up the excellence…

    Happy Wednesday.

    your words are super brilliant here, divine imagery.
    🙂

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    Promising Poets' Poetry Cafe said this on March 30, 2011 at 2:19 pm | Reply

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