I’ve Been

Befuddled

"B"

in my dream
in the darkness and the light

in relationships
in partnerships
in fights and flights.

Bewildered

by my conclusion
by my confusion
by my delusion

Baffled
by your answer
That U R the Solution

“O M G”
by
Sammie L. Carter
Copyright 05April 2011

~ by Sam373's Blog on April 6, 2011.

5 Responses to “I’ve Been”

  1. Another great post. Thanks for sharing this. Spending time sitting down to writing short stories and poems is something I truly enjoy in life. I enjoy reading your blog very much.

    A Great Day for Spring – Poem

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  2. I like the rhythm in this one, Sam, and how there is a beat to that stanza that starts “by my conclusion”.

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  3. this is nice 🙂

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  4. Very nice poem. I like your blog too and as I’m commenting, I should say it is very easy to read. Good for my eyes :). I saw your gravatar on Dreamwalker’s blog so just popped over to check out yours. Your poems are wonderful!

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