“S” Sing-Sang-Sung

I’ve sang songs as I have sat by the sea shore

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I’ve written songs about singing songs

I sang while sitting by the sea shore

I am a song sang while sitting by the sea shore.

I am the sea of which you sang while sitting there singing by the shore

I am the wind of which she sang as she set singing songs by the sea shore

I am the shore that set by the sea since eternity did sing of me

And I sing of the days and the nights when you sat singing songs

About the sea that sang songs about me as I set singing songs

BY THE SEA SHORE

Sammie L. Carter

~ by Sam373's Blog on April 9, 2011.

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20 Responses to ““S” Sing-Sang-Sung”

delightful……

love music/sweet songs..

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Promising Poets' Poetry Cafe said this on April 9, 2011 at 4:45 pm | Reply
What fun Sam! I read this aloud for the sheer joy of tongue twisting! 🙂

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lesliepaints said this on April 9, 2011 at 5:20 pm | Reply
welcome..

such lovely singing words.
a treat for the weekend.
🙂

Happy Rally.

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Jingle said this on April 9, 2011 at 7:14 pm | Reply
this is really great!

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lunawitch15 said this on April 10, 2011 at 6:57 am | Reply
Lovely playful use of words…delightful.

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Neezes said this on April 10, 2011 at 7:22 am | Reply
I will make my students sing this song about the sea and sigh as symphony pervades the air. Good work!

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www.nonsensefile.blogspot.com said this on April 10, 2011 at 9:44 am | Reply
- Thank You very much.
  
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  Sam373 said this on April 10, 2011 at 5:27 pm | Reply
Lovely piece. The repetition makes it hypnotic, so to me your song is really a Gregorian chant. Thanks for sharing this one for the rally!

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Julie Laing said this on April 10, 2011 at 5:54 pm | Reply
Brilliant! Ambitious but mastered 🙂

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glh said this on April 10, 2011 at 6:39 pm | Reply
why set and setting Sam in the first two lines? They threw me off but I dug the tongue twister quality of it 🙂

enjoy the rally!

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Life: Between the lines said this on April 10, 2011 at 9:59 pm | Reply
- SORRY “Sitting”
  
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  Sam373 said this on April 11, 2011 at 8:55 pm | Reply
I remember a tale that mermaids sing in the sea to lure men in their trap…this poem of yours sounds like about a singing mermaid…but of different melody!

LOved the sing, sang, sung of it! I could feel the rhythm of your words!

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Amity said this on April 11, 2011 at 11:47 am | Reply
🙂
It’s kind of hard to read this one aloud…
Great write

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eclipseofthemoon said this on April 12, 2011 at 12:05 pm | Reply
traveling ahead, Sam? 🙂 I tht the A-Z was still in K or L 😀 well executed, but yeah, little hard off the tongue 🙂

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Vinay said this on April 13, 2011 at 6:59 pm | Reply
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Outstanding Poet of National Poetry Month in 2011 Award Nominations | Promising Poets' Poetry Cafe said this on April 14, 2011 at 7:58 pm | Reply
Pretty twisted one! 🙂 I love singing and your awesome singing poem… 😉

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magher1 said this on April 15, 2011 at 8:22 pm | Reply
I’m singing with you 🙂
Lovely poem Sam!!
I’m nominating you for Outstanding Poet of National Poetry Month.

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Alethea said this on April 17, 2011 at 2:34 pm | Reply
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Outstanding Poet of National Poetry Month in 2011 Award Nominations « A Broken World said this on April 18, 2011 at 8:59 am | Reply
a real tongue twister Sam… clever usage of words.. The Sea having had many a song sang about her shores.. 🙂

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