I WAS ADRIFT

I was falling into the abyss when your voice I heard

And my soul you caught by reminding me that I’m not alone.

Oh, to be loved as the creator intended each to be.

And that none should fall by the way as a song unsung.

Never missed nor sometimes thought of

But remembered

And that memory acted upon.

What a feat to undertake;

To reach out into the darkness,

To raise one’s soul out of the time line

And glare into the universe that is all encompassing

To glimpse a shooting star,

Which was and is my soul.

And with determined intent you pressed that electronic trigger

And snared me with a tagline

Anchoring me to your loving concern

You redirected my trajectory

By reminding me of the whole of which I am a part

And as a shining star you’ve become that beacon

That beckons me home.

Home

The whole of which I am a part

And to know that when I am not

I will be missed.

BUT NOW I’m HOME

Sammie L. Carter

June 30, 2011

Thank YOU Lynn

~ by Sam373's Blog on June 30, 2011.

Posted in Poetry, Relationship
Tags: Affairs, complex reality, Feelings, FRIENDSHIP, Love, Pain, Respect, Searching, Spiritual Relationship, Tears

7 Responses to “I WAS ADRIFT”

Brilliant. I especially like the lines: “Oh, to be loved as the creator intended each to be./ And that none should fall by the way as a song unsung.” The first bit reminds me of Mumford & Sons: “Be more like the man you were made to be.” (‘Sigh No More’) You can read my review of this song with its biblical significance here: http://calminthechaotic.wordpress.com/2011/06/27/mumford-sons-review-to-follow/

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calminthechaotic said this on June 30, 2011 at 7:16 pm | Reply
“To Glimpse A shooting star, which was and is my Soul….” … Wonderful poetry Sam.. We are all part of the Universe, and No one is ever alone… For we are ultimately ALL ONE… ~ Dreamwalker~

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Sue Dreamwalker said this on June 30, 2011 at 7:53 pm | Reply
I am really impressed with your writing skills as well as with the layout on your weblog. Is this a paid theme or did you customize it yourself? Anyway keep up the excellent quality writing, it’s rare to see a nice blog like this one today..

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divx film izle said this on July 2, 2011 at 5:59 am | Reply
I agree 100%

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cevon said this on July 20, 2011 at 10:42 pm | Reply
Gorgeous and impressive Sam….nice to see you back 🙂

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eclipseofthemoon said this on July 21, 2011 at 9:05 pm | Reply
Hi Im itching to know if I may use this article in one of my blogs if I link back to you? Thanks

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we are at war said this on July 25, 2011 at 1:52 pm | Reply
- Feel free to link. If you write an article i will post it as your opinion with a link to your site.
  
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  Sam373 said this on August 4, 2011 at 1:11 am | Reply